Afterwards the Simpsons family decide to go to Alaska, on the way when the family stops at a convenient shop, Marge, Bart and Maggie stays in the car while Homer and Lisa enters the shop and sees this wanted poster with the Simpsons family so when Lisa draws the attention of the owner, Homer draws over the characters and the owner says “there they are” and the police comes and arrest the other family.
When the family arrives in Alaska, they had a happy time there but unfortunately one night when they had a family night watching the news, Kent Brockman says the Bart is wanted for the destroy of the lake so Marge says the family must go back to Springfield and Kent also said if they return in ten days then everyone will give Bart a chance as long as he helps clean up the lake and promises to keep it clean.
But Homer won’t let his son go back because he knows it will be a trap and Marge just said well Bart is part of Springfield so the citizens won’t do that, so they return back to Springfield.
As the family arrives back to Springfield, the cops arrest Bart and is temporary placed in jail so when the rest of the family returns home they all blame Marge for putting Bart in the jail.
Why the police put Bart in the jail is because Bart is always known as a troublemaker so they think if it happens once then it will happen again.
But Marge goes to Mayor Quimbys office and complaint why they didn’t kept their promise.
Mayor Quimby then says, “ very well we will give him a chance then.” Then everyone gives Bart a chance.
When the citizens of Springfield co-operates to help Bart clean up the lake of Springfield, Marge is very surprised that Bart has made a changes and to see that his behaviour is acted like a little boy again so is very satisfied.
Mayor Quimby opens a town meeting and gives Bart an award for taking responsible and cleaning Springfield and then gives Lisa an award for her sucess of the enviroment.
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Although it may become clear, I’m not sure that the relation or necessity of each event of your story at this time.
Gennoveus already pointed out the part about fixing the roof. How is this part related to other parts?
Why do they decide to go to Alaska? From the beginning, the Simpsons takes place in the fictional American town without any geographical coordinates or references to U.S. states. If they go to Alaska, I think it is better that there is some reasonable necessity.
Hi Brens,
I enjoyed reading your story, as I did your previous story.
As Kimiko mentioned, I also thought why the family went to Alaska. But, I have not seen the movie yet, so I thought they go to Alaska in the movie.
Even if Simpsons family does not go to Alaska in the movie, the actions which are done by Bart are possible to happen in the TV series. So, I enjoyed reading it.
If the original movie does not concern Alaska, and if I could advise you, you may need to stick to the original movie story.
Why the Simpsons family go to Alaska is because the citizens of Springfield Chase after the Simpsons of the family which force them to leave Springfield and they know that if they stay in USA they will be in danger but in other words if they go to Alaska, no one will know where they will be and they safe to start a new living in Alaska.
great work brendon but the story sounds alot like a news report.
Would be good to put some dialogue in to the story. If you get the characters speaking it will break up the story sounding like a news report and will bring it more alive.
Also if you use more describing words you help the readers imagination come alive more. Keep the good work up.
Brens- I Like it!As I said before I haven't sat through any Simpson movies before and I find what you have written is easy to follow and pleasant to read. I think it's quite delightful and not heavy going. Keep writing!
SIMPSON IS THE COOL IDEA TO WRITE AS UR STORY. I CAN FEEL YOU REALLY WANT TO CREATIVE THE NEW IMAGE OF SIMPSON STORY.EVEN I HAVENT BEEN WTCH THE MOVIE OF UR STORY BUT I REALLY WANT TO WATCH THE SIMPSON MOVIE!!!!!!!!!!!
I’m sorry for my previous comment. At that time I did not understand what is ‘fanfic’.
Now, I’m impressed by your unrestrained and bold idea, although my present understanding is a little bit shallow. I’m looking forward to reading your complete work.
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