Tuesday, March 25, 2008

Lost TV Series

Scene 2: Jack and the others don’t realize that Hugo tripped over a log so before Hugo could call out the believers had him at gun point. You make a noise Ill shoot. Jake and the team arrive back to the beach discovering that Hugo some how didn’t make it back. Then Lee speaks in English saying something about Hugo. Amazement sweeps over everyone's face. Charlie opens his mouth and laughter flows out ha Lee spoke English. Everyone was amazed. John says this is not a laughing matter Hugo is not here we have to go back. Jack says it’s too risky we have to go 2morrow when it’s light.
John doesn’t listen to Jack he decides to go back and look for Hugo. While walking awhile John notices a metal door he opens the door and sees that it’s a hatch. He looks puzzled but he dears himself to go down and have a look at the bottom of the hatch he sees a lot of computers.

The next morning around 7am Jack wakes the others up but notices that John is not in his hut.
James says I had a feeling we should of kept an eye on him, he’s trouble.
Kate says he’s just trying to help. Charlie says help that’s nonce now we have to look for both of them.
Jack says lets split up me Lee and Kate will go this way James and Charlie you guys go that way will meet back at the beach in 5 hours.

5 hours swept by so fast they all managed to get back to the beach in one piece still no sign of John and Hugo.
Everyone’s getting a bit nervous now.

Jack again says will make tracks again in 2 hours everyone get some rest.
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2 hours were up they all packed there bags with water and food and started out again.
Just before leaving the beach this car out of no where fly’s past them it was Hugo.
Lee says ha……….. Hugo.
Hugo jumps out of the car and says I escaped from the believers and as I was running I noticed this car, I roll started it and I was away. As I escaped me noticed the believers had caught someone they put a bag over his head but by the clothes he was wearing I knew it was john.
Kate asked is he ok? Hugo says not sure but I know where they are keeping him.
James says ok lets go rescues him. Jack says gather up all the guns you can find in 20 minutes we will depart.

Just before leaving the beach out in the distance they see a boat. James and charley swim out to it they find that there’s no one on board. James says this might be a trap Charlie says no its not. So they call out to Hugo jack Lee and Kate come on hurry up. They all jumped in the boat continuing on their rescue mission for John Lock.
After sailing for three hours they come to the believer’s island they decide to stay the night in the boat.

The next morning they start out to find John and on top of the hill there he is he is tied up to a tree. Lee says Lock, Charlie says shut up they might hear you, Jack says we have to check out the area before we go in to rescue John. Jack Kate and James go up the hill Lee and Charlie stay behind guarding their position.

7 comments:

Audrey said...

Haitian! I went back to read your first post on LOST and this one and I can see you are getting into the story. I see you all the characters you said you will use have been introduced. I'm following your story . Your chose of words like "amazement sweeps over everyone's face and "5 hours swept over so fast" are very descriptive. Persons reading your story can picture what's going on. Keep up the good work!

Audrey said...

Haitian! I went back to read your first post on LOST and this one and I can see you are getting into the story. I see you all the characters you said you will use have been introduced. I'm following your story . Your chose of words like "amazement sweeps over everyone's face and "5 hours swept over so fast" are very descriptive. Persons reading your story can picture what's going on. Keep up the good work!

Audrey said...

Haitian! I went back to read your first post on LOST and this one and I can see you are getting into the story. I see you all the characters you said you will use have been introduced. I'm following your story . Your chose of words like "amazement sweeps over everyone's face and "5 hours swept over so fast" are very descriptive. Persons reading your story can picture what's going on. Keep up the good work!

Audrey said...

Haitian! I went back to read your first post on LOST and this one and I can see you are getting into the story. I see you all the characters you said you will use have been introduced. I'm following your story . Your chose of words like "amazement sweeps over everyone's face and "5 hours swept over so fast" are very descriptive. Persons reading your story can picture what's going on. Keep up the good work!

Audrey said...

Sorry -made some error and posted my comments 4 times! can't delete.

Hisako said...

Hi Haitian,
I could enjoy reading your "LOST" even though I have never seen the TV series. I think it is because you described the situation very well, so I was able to dwaw the picture scene by scene in my mind.
If I could advise you, you should have written a few sentences which describe why they are there, before you start writing the main stream.
I am looking forward to reading your next story!

Kimiko said...

Hi, Carl

You are very good at keeping tension of story, so I’m drawn into it, although I have never seen the TV series. I’m really looking forward to the ending.