Friday, March 14, 2008

lost

As for the viewers if you havent watched lost there are many characters but im only going to tell you some of them because in this series im only going to use some of them.\
First of all theres Jack, Sorea which his real name is James Hugo Charle, Kate, John and Lee.

Sene 2: Jack and the others dont relize that Hugo tripped over a log so before Hugo could call out the beleivers had him at gun point. You make a noise Ill shoot. Jake and the team arrive back to the beach discovering that Hugo some how didnt make it back. Then Lee speaks in English saying something about Hugo. Amazment sweeps over everyone's face. Charle opens his mouth and laughter flows out ha Lee spoke English. Everyone was amazed. John says this is not a laughing matter Hugo is not here we have to go back. Jake says its too risky we have to go 2morrow when its light.

5 comments:

Audrey said...

After discussing 'iWrite' and your idea on LOSS on the phone this morning I went on Google search and read some reviews. You might be interested to read what some Loss fans regard as the best Episode yet or 'a special Episode'.

haitian said...

Yea thanks audrey for giving me that web site, yes i looked at it im trying to think of some new ideas.

Audrey said...

Hello again! We were discussing today about "iWrite". Yes, pretty difficult when we aren't sure what to do next. I too haven't ever written anything much except essays at school and that was a very long time ago!
(I HOPE it's not the case of the BLIND LEADING THE BLIND!)
Anyway your request to blog you some of the things to consider when looking at-CHARACTERS(which you are working on now) in relation to the overall story), POV and SCENES.


The following are some points I've read in some books about writing stories-
'Characters. Story- is about Characters(not about or not mainly about events). Events happens which affect them and the story is ultimately- about a character resolving a conflict.

Scenes. The storyline/s chosen to bring your characters from the beginning -their conflict or crisis to a resolution. "It's a timeline ,a record of events caused by and causing other events". ...They create tension, worry on the part of the leader or viewer and the need to look at the next episode...." and to see what happens next!

POV( Dr.Paul talked about in an earlier lecture).
Decide "whose point of wiew" or POVs you are telling the story- is it one of the 'participants in the action' (OR maybe an observer removed from the happening/s or action) but aware of it.

Haitian I hope these points will be of help -if not just discard.

Kimiko said...

I’m interested in your choice because I think that the situation may make possible any unfolding of your story. Therefore, it can be said that the work will be hard, but I think that your enjoyment of this work will be increase. However, there is one big problem for me.

In fact that I’ve never seen ‘lost’. Then, I’m reading TV2 web and trying to get familiar with the story and the characters, but I cannot distinguish whether the opening of your story is your creation or an adaptation of one of original episodes at present.

If it is the latter, please let me know which episode it is, and then I can enjoy both the original story and your story.

brens said...

very creative and good ideas, I don't watch "Lost" so I can't help much but keep up with the good work and the good effort.